Thread:Mk-band/@comment-28139919-20160705132456

Hi Mika,

Your  contribution  so far is excellent, and you have found really useful information for the conference. However, I would shorten and simplify your answers a bit so the other class mates can understand the English, and that Turkey's main points are.

For Example:

At the same time, the government's attitude of the refugee issue led to stark tensions among its political and societal forces, as Turkey's border regions contend with increasing security and economic challenge

could be shortened to...

The govrnement's attitude to refugees has caused political tensions, with regions near the border have security and economic problems  